Question

Your school recently held a music talent competition. Your teacher has asked you to write a report about the competition. In your report, say what was successful about the competition, and suggest how it can be improved for next year. Below are two comments from your classmates. Write a report for your teacher, giving your views.it have to be between 150 and 200 words long

Answer 1

Step-by-step explanation:

start with an introduction explaining how your school is holding a music competition, then include in the thesis statement that some thing went well some could be improved

in the the body paragraph write about the good part of the music competition and expand a bit your idea( detail it a little, not too much otherwise your word limit will be crossed by a lot)

then about the part that could be improved in that competition

conclude it by saying it was good overall and you hope next year it goes better or more as planned