Question

Rewrite the following text. Your goals are to correct grammatical errors and to make the text more concise:

If our clients’ interest in their land is substantially invaded by stables or kennels as a result of odors or sounds created by the proper conduct of those businesses and not taking into account any special sensitivities on the part of our clients, is the harm to our clients significantly more important than the benefit of the stables or kennel to the community?

Answer 1

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Step-by-step explanation:

If stables or kennels substantially invade our clients’ interest in their land as a result of odors or sounds created by the proper conduct of those businesses and not taking into account any special sensitivities on the part of our clients, is the harm to our clients significantly more important than the benefit of the stables or kennel to the community?