Question

How do I make this sentence better?

Answer 1

You can choose from the following:

-We can reasonably conclude from what has been discussed above that dreaming isn't a negative thing for people to experience; it won't affect your sleep, except your thoughts and attitudes may cause you to have sleep problems; and, other than that, dreaming is a way for you to experience different things that you want in real life.

-We can reasonably conclude from what has been discussed above that dreaming isn't a negative thing for people to experience; it won't affect your sleep, except that your thoughts and attitudes may cause you to have sleep problems; and, other than that, dreaming is a way for you to experience different things that you want to experience in real life.

-We can reasonably infer from the discussion above that dreaming isn't a bad thing for people to experience; it won't affect your sleep, with the exception of the possibility that your thoughts and attitudes may make you experience sleep problems; aside from that, dreaming is a way for you to experience different things that you want in real life.

-From the discussion above, it is reasonable to infer that dreaming isn't a bad thing for people to experience. It won't affect your sleep, with the exception of the possibility that your thoughts and attitudes will make you have sleep issues. Aside from that, dreaming is a way for you to experience various things that you wouldn't otherwise be able to in reality.


(I was bored and had time on my hands lol)

Answer 2

See below

Step-by-step explanation:

Why is this dream essay haunting your life dude? With that being said, here is what I recommend (I wrote it in formal tense, but I don't know if that was what you were looking for)

"Shown from what has been discussed above, it can be reasonably be concluded that dreaming is not a negative to experience. Overall, it does not affect ones sleep patterns less your thoughts, attitudes or habits intrude themselves. Otherwise, it seems that dreaming is a way to experience different things than one may wish for in the real world."