Question

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What Is wrong in this expert from Diary of a Hogwarts Student Mystery of The Slytherins?

Day 1:


Today A friendly Wizard, Harry Potter, Greated me when I got to school it's my first day so I didn't quite know my way around yet. But luckily, I met a nice wizard who showed me around His name is Draco Malfoy and he told me he was a slytherin and that tonight all the new students including me would see what house they were in with The Sorting hat. He said I would be sorted into Slytherin with him. Which is pretty cool. But his whole mood changed from excited to hatred as soon as the hat said I am a Gryffindor.

Answer 1

*Greeted

*Into Slytherin House

Step-by-step explanation:

Have a Great day!

Answer 2

In this excerpt, there are a few grammatical errors and some awkward phrasing. Here are a few examples:

"Today A friendly Wizard, Harry Potter, Greated me" should be "Today a friendly wizard, Harry Potter, greeted me."

"it's my first day" should be "it's my first day,"

"didn't quite know my way around yet" should be "didn't quite know my way around yet."

"But luckily, I met a nice wizard who showed me around His name is Draco Malfoy" should be "But luckily, I met a nice wizard who showed me around. His name is Draco Malfoy."

"Which is pretty cool" should be "Which is pretty cool."

"he said I would be sorted into Slytherin with him" should be "he said I would be sorted into Slytherin with him,"

"his whole mood changed from excited to hatred as soon as the hat said I am a Gryffindor." should be "his whole mood changed from excited to hatred as soon as the hat said I am a Gryffindor."