Question

can someone help me improve this sentence. "Many nutrition experts believe In the school lunch program can be fixed, It will require healthy food, It will require cooks. It will require kitchens to prepare it. More money will only create a larger junk-food distribution system. We need to scrap the current system. We need to start from scratch. Washington needs to give schools enough money to cook unprocessed foods. The food should be produced without pesticides. The food should be produced without chemical fertilizers. The food should be locally grown."

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Many nutrition experts believe In the school lunch program can be fixed, It will require healthy food, and It will require cooks. It will require kitchens to prepare it. More money will only create a larger junk-food distribution system. We need to scrap the current system. We need to start from scratch. Washington needs to give schools enough money to cook unprocessed foods. Food should be produced without pesticides. Food should be produced without chemical fertilizers. The food should be locally grown.