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What is wrong with this sentence - Sean and his friends were altogether at the restaurant when the storm caused a major power outage

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Altogether and all together are different words. It should be written like this : Sean and his friends were all together at the restaurant when the storm caused a major power outage.
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Sean and his friends we’re together at the restaurant when a storm caused a major power outage.

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