Question

Now it's time to revise the dialogue in your script. Read your script several times. Each time, ask yourself the questions below and note your answers. Make any needed changes to your script, and then boldface any changes you make.

Does the dialogue sound authentic?
Does each character have a unique voice?
Are all lines of dialogue necessary? Does the dialogue explain something that could be shown through action instead?


Please just help me I need a short script please!!

Answer 1

Mary: Mom what's for dinner

Mom: Spaghetti and meat balls

Mary: Mom, I am a vegetarian!

Mom: Just eat the spaghetti with butter

Mary: I don't like Butter. You never make what I like

Mom: You don't like anything (she argues) you liked spaghetti with butter last week!

Mary: Fine but can I have ice cream for dessert?

Mom: ok