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Write a pargraph to describe any one of the following events. Use vivid verbs wherever you can.

"My Best Friend's Birthday Party"

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I approached my best friend at her birthday party. She was in a hurry to open the gifts she had received. When she wasn’t looking, I tossed the stuffed bear I got for her onto the table full of presents. After examining the bear, she jumped in excitement and thanked me.
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We arrived at my best friends house, the place bustling with noise. It seems the party had already started. People were jumping around, swaying to the music, and shouting. For such a small house, it seemed to be full of people. We walked slowly up the path to her house, passing many happy people. As we walked in, the noise became more prevalent. We spent the party dancing and singing to bad karaoke. We continued swaying to music, our steps very disorganized. The music was blaring and people were having loads of fun. As the night fell, we decided to have a slumber party. We all slept soundly, our energy drained from the party. My best friends birthday was pretty fun.
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