Question

HELP!!!!

Hi so im writing a argumentative essay on why zoos are bad and I really need help with a few closing statements.
This is my conclusion "In conclusion, zoos are dangerous because they exploit animals for their own gain, keep them captive in unnatural environments, and sometimes sell them to places were they are physically abused."
any suggestions?

Answer 1

You could add something about how zoos should only be a safe place for injured or endangered animals and not for profit or entertainment

Answer 2

Answer: you could add: While some may say that zoos could often be considered safe spaces for animals, they are still being held in captivity, and aren't able to thrive in their natural habitats instead of behind a glass