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The teacher looked up in exasperation. “You three clowns plan to make jokes the rest of your life?” she asked.(text)

The teacher looked up in frustration “You three clowns intend to make fun till the end of times?” she wondered.


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This was the first time that a path to my dreams was shown to me. Deep inside, I knew I could accomplish anything if given the chance. I just didn’t know how to find that opportunity. That presentation showed me the possibility of reaching goals I had only


dared to dream about. I think if a person dreams hard enough, sometimes a door will open to make that dream come true. Of course, it helps to be prepared to go through the door when the opportunity arises. We almost missed it.


We also had no idea that day that we were forming a pact that would last a lifetime. We just knew that somehow each of us individually might fail, but the strength of the three of us together just might be enough to succeed.

Answer 1

This was the first time that a passage to my dreams was shown to me. Deep inside, I knew I could manage anything if given the chance. I just didn’t know how to find that opportunity. That presentation showed me the possibility of touching values I simply attempted to dream about.

I think if a person dreams sufficiently strong, sometimes a door will open to make that dream come true. Of course, it helps to be willing to go through the door when the occasion emerges. We almost missed it.

We also had a lack of knowledge that day that we were forming an alliance that would last an eternity. We just knew that somehow each of us individually might fail, but the power of the three of us together just might be enough to be prosperous.

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