Question

Which of the sentences below offers the smoothest revision of the following "choppy" passage?

The house was dark. I waited for my skin to stop crawling. I went inside. It was smelly. It was creepy.
• I went inside the house, which was dark and smelly and creepy and it made my skin crawl.
) While I waited for my skin to stop crawling, I went inside the house, which was dark, smelly, and creepy.
The house was dark, smelly, and creepy, but after my skin stopped crawling, I went inside.
The house was dark and creepy, and I went inside, waiting for my skin to stop crawling from the smelliness.

Answer 1

C. The house was dark, smelly, and creepy, but after my skin stopped crawling, I went inside.

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