Question

Directions: Revise the sentences so that they could be used in a report for this course. Be sure to remove any informal language and use jargon where appropriate.

Today I learned some sick stuff about volcanoes! The hot, dangerous stuff comes outta the top where it sometimes goes boom! The red stuff can be sticky or runny. These things cause lotsa damage. But they can help out sometimes, too.



Now, rewrite your corrected response below:

Answer 1

Answer:rewrite the explanation

Explanation:today in science class I learned about volcanoes!THe hot lava rises from the ground to the surface and makes its way the the top of the valcono, when the lava reaches the top it gushes out and is also known as and volcanic eruption. a volcanic eruptions here the volcano gets full to the top with lava and gushes out onto the land.the lave is very hot ( never touch went it first comes out of the volcano) and hardens very fast to form crystals. whether is a volcanic eruption and can damage but also help the earth.volcanoes were very fun to learn about today.