Question

PLEASE HELP

Read the following passage.

"It's amazing in here," Christopher said to Leanna as they entered the room. They looked around, taking everything in. It was truly stunning to behold. Leanna gasped and went over to the corner to pick up an item in awe.

Which suggestion would best help revise the passage for clarity?

A) The author could include background information on Christopher and Leanna.

B) The author could use imagery to describe what the characters are seeing in the room.

C) The antagonist could surprise the characters.

D) There could be more dialogue.

Answer 1

Answer: A

Explanation: Because the general idea of the passage was to emphasize how surprised they were at what they were seeing, the author should describe the background in order to let the reader understand the meaning better.