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Im starting to write my first book called 'dressed for revenge' i have done a title and im hoping for this to be a sort of murder/crime story can anyone help with an eye-catching introduction that will bring the readers intrested? I will give creds

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"As the sun set on the quiet town of Willowdale, a single shot rang out, shattering the peaceful evening. When Detective Jack Norton arrived on the scene, he found a woman lying on the ground, a red dress pooled around her and a look of pure malice etched on her face. It was clear that this was no ordinary murder. Someone had killed her, and they did it with a clear message in mind: revenge. But as Jack delves deeper into the case, he realizes that nothing is as it seems and that the killer may be closer than he thinks."

This introduction sets up a tense and intriguing situation, and introduces the main character, Detective Jack Norton. It also hints at the theme of revenge, which could be a driving force in the story. I hope this helps get you started! If you have any specific questions or would like further assistance, don't hesitate to ask.

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