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Which choice avoids fragments to present the information clearly and correctly?

a) Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved it. Her sleek design and funny videos. It attracted a large crowd.

b) Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved her sleek design and funny videos. Attracting a large crowd.

c) Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success. Because of his teenage daughter's computer skills. His website received a ton of donations. People loved it. The sleek design and funny videos attracted a large crowd.

d) Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success. Because of his teenage daughter's computer skills, his website received a ton of donations. People loved it. Her sleek design and funny videos attracted a large crowd.

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The answer is D.

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d) Mr. Lang's fundraiser was a success. Because of his teena
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