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Can any1 let me know if this is good?

Death
Death is a road
I wish I hadn’t found
I didn’t know
How I was needed to stay around
I lost my family
The love of my life
My heart was torn
People wanted me alive
I didn’t know
What I had done
Now all I can do
Is watch them run
Away from themselves
Away from death scythe
Away from their life
my poetry.....

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it is perfect don't change anything!!!
User Web Nexus
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That sounds really good to me!
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