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A fiction writer is hoping to evoke a sense of terror while describing the loud noise of a battle scene. Which phrase will be MOST effective?

a. military ordinance surrounded him
b. the missiles flew by
c. the adversary's shells whistled by
d. explosive shells screamed in his ears

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The best option from the list would be "d. explosive shells screamed in his ear," since this most brings to life the sheer volume and terror of the shells passing by.
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