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The life of a typical college student is characterized by time spent in many different areas. How can this thesis statement be improved?

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remember a thesis has 3 supports at the end the when writing your conclusion you must start with your 3 supports



so lets get to the problem


The life of a typical college student is characterized by time spent in different areas, friends ,and peer pressure
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