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The name of the ride—Killer Bees—as well as the graphic
portrayal of bees attacking people and pets illustrated on the walls and 


passenger cars–are in no way appropriate for young children

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The name of the ride, Killer Bees, as well as the graphic portrayal of bees attacking people and pets illustrated on the walls and passenger cars are in no way appropriate for children.

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The name of the ride, "Killer Bees" , as well as the graphic portrayal of bees attacking people and pets illustrated on the walls and passenger cars, are in no way appropriate for young children.
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