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Some people thought politics were the perfect profession for young William, but his subversive activities in college kept him from being elected to any political office. what are the errors?

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The main errors in the sentence "Some people thought politics were the perfect profession for young William, but his subversive activities in college kept him from being elected to any political office" are with number and tense. "Office" should be changed to "offices".
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