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is this a run on sentence ? does anything need to be changed ? The rainforests of Puerto Rico soothe the visitor with lush vegetation, a cool mist, and, occasionally, a view of the entire island.

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To me it seems run on, so it should be-

Rainforests of Puerto Rico soothe the visitor with lush vegetation and a cool mist. Also an occasional view of the entire island.

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