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How can you best combine these two sentences into one sentence with a parallel structure?

He spent most of September visiting parks. He flew kites for most of October.

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Answer: he spent most of his time visiting parks, while in October he mostly flew kites"

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"In September he spent most of his time visiting parks, while in October he mostly flew kites" would be a possible combination, although there are several others you could choose.
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