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show don't tell the following pls: "the party was busy", ""the party was luxurious", "everyone was happy", "the narrator was excited", "a famous singer performed", "something went horribly wrong"
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show don't tell the following pls: "the party was busy", ""the party was luxurious", "everyone was happy", "the narrator was excited", "a famous singer performed", "something went horribly wrong"

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If I get what your trying to say is you want me to put all of that in a sentence.

The party was very busy that night, and let me tell you! Was the best party I went to. It was so luxurious! Even a famous singer preformed! Everyone was so happy about that! But then... something went horribly wrong.....

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a famous singer performed
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