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Look at passage 1, then look at passage 2, which uses an ellipsis incorrectly. Rewrite passage 2 so that it uses an ellipsis correctly.

Passage Passage 1 (original): According to a news report, "Last Thursday, during an event broadcast around the globe, J. Thompson Whipple made history by juggling 10 bananas at once."

Passage 2 (incorrect use of ellipsis): According to a news report, "Last Thursday, during . . . J. Thompson Whipple made history by juggling 10 bananas at once

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According to a news report, "Last Thursday, during an event broadcast J. Thompson Whipple made history by juggling 10 bananas at once."

Sorry if im wrong i tryed im also late

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Answer:

passage 1 i think i'm pretty sure

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