Question

Rewrite the sentences below using phrases, clauses, and parallel structure to combine the important ideas.

Granny appeared to be a simple cook. She sold food to the army. Granny was really working for the guerillas. She provided them with ammunition.

Answer 1

Appearing to be a simple cook, Granny sold food to the army. She also provided ammunition, Granny was really working for the guerillas.

Answer 2

Granny appeared to be a simple cook, however she sold food to the army, which shows that she was really working for the guerillas. Besides, she provided them with ammunition.

Parallel structure is a grammatical construction with two or more elements with the same grammatical form.

Phrase is a group of words with a meaning.

Clause is a combination of a subject and a predicate in a sentence.