Which revision best eliminates wordiness in the following sentence?

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Using pronouns to replace extra words.

Systemmanic answered Sep 12, 2017

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but their is no way to be the answer nun of them have the right way. Should it be C. change "was in total agreement" to "agreed".

Bart Kerfeld answered Sep 15, 2017

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