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Jamison walked through the forest, and he saw the sun coming through the branches of the trees. Which BEST explains how the style of the sentence can be improved? A. by making the tone consistent B. by correcting spelling errors C. by correcting punctuation errors D. by including vivid descriptions

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D. By making vivid descriptions
This is a boring sentence and needs better language to interest the reader, hoped this helped
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