when writing a thesis statment for an essay
start by trying to incorperate words that corresponde to what type of essay
then wrap up with the themes of each of the body paragraphs
for example: a persuasive essay, main topic about a girl who went to a fair
did the girl have fun or not, name two or three things that support that concept
thesis: the girl had fun at the fair by spending time with family, all the sights, and making fond memories.