Question

Look at the following short outline for an explanatory essay. How would you improve it?

Claim: The Aztec Empire achieved greater developments in government, society, and culture than the Inca Empire.

I. Introduction
II. Aztec Empire
A. Political Developments
B. Social Developments
C. Cultural Developments
III. Conclusion

A.Use more colorful language.
B.Have the conclusion immediately following the introduction
C.Introduce new arguments in the conclusion.
D.Add a section about the Inca Empire.

Answer 1

CORRECT ANSWER (D)~ Add a section about the Inca Empire

Answer 2

I would improve the following short outline for an explanatory essay by adding a section about the Inca Empire. The answer is letter D. This is because, the claim is about Aztec Empire achieving greater developments in government, society, and culture than the Inca Empire and we want to know why is it better than the Inca Empire.