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Best revision for this sentence? (In image)

Best revision for this sentence? (In image)-example-1

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Avenue, two of our cities busiest thoroughfares, cross. Hope that helps
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Avenue, two of our cities busiest thoroughfares, cross.
This makes the most sense.
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