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So here's another question, do you think this poem is a good introduction?

I needed to write a poem introducing myself and I had to use the parts of speech and this is what I randomly came up with, what do you think? I'm not very good at poetry but I guess this sums it all up

Funny, quiet,
clinical but considerate
Kind heart, cold face
I need to chase
to see what lies beneath the,
cold face, heart's warm
like a fire place.

But outside she's a mystery,
so cold full of misery,
You may ask,
Is she Depressed,
Is she stressed,
What goes on in her brain
With such a face full of emptiness.

She's fine, You see
This is me
With a heart full of warmth
but a face full of misery.

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Hi , to be honest that poem is great , you describe yourself very well and I think that you should keep it . It is a good introduction.
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I think you should keep it cuz this is a really really good poem from cat77
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