1) A ball just went through not threw
2) should be piece instead of peace
3) neighbours
4) they're game again- doesn't make sense, should be they're playing that game again.
5) should be allowed instead of aloud.
6) should be red door not door red
7) I'm not sure about as a beat?
8) We were once children too instead of to.
9) Well, children need to play (Add the capital letter on well)