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Make this sentence more interesting: The trees on the lawn.

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The trees on the lawn, casting an eerie dark shadow, completely leafless and their skeleton-like bare limbs clacking against each other in the wind, seemed to reach toward me, its shadow from the moon climbing up my legs, then my stomach, and finally swallowing me into complete darkness.
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The trees on the lawn were green like seaweed. 
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