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Restate Thesis : Cellphones are good because it’s a good way to communicate with the teacher and do better in school.

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One way to restate that sentence is to say: "Cellphones are a good way to keep in contact with the teacher and do well in school".

Or you could possibly say: "Cellphones allow you to do well in school because you are able to contact the teacher".

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Cellphones can allow you to do better in school, and are a good way to communicate with teachers.
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