Question

Read the excerpt from a student’s essay.

As Rainsford enters the dining room, he immediately becomes aware of Zaroff’s expensive and sophisticated taste. He notes the decorations, the food, the drink, all of which are exquisite and advertise Zaroff’s privileged aristocratic upbringing. Rainsford is initially impressed by the general’s home and finds him to be a "thoughtful and affable host.”

Which revision would best help expand the ideas in the excerpt?

a. adding some of the dialogue between Rainsford and Zaroff
b. adding that Rainsford comes from a privileged background as well
c. adding that the residence is situated on a wild overgrown island
d. adding a more-detailed description of the decorations, food, and drink

Answer 1

C

Step-by-step explanation:

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Answer 2

The correct answer would be C - within the context of a literary essay the most valuable addition would be to include the information that Rainsford also comes from a priveleged background. This is because it means that rather than simply rewriting the narrative, the student will be showing that they understand the importance of context and social standing within the story.