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What technique most contributes to the pace of the following excerpt?

"I looked all around me, but I cannot say how long I remained there; I was paralyzed with terror, cold with fright, ready to shout out, ready to die."
A. use of several short phrases connected by commas
B. use of very detailed and descriptive imagery
C. use of words that slow the sentence down
D. none of the above

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Use of several short phrases connected by commas.
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A. use of several short phrases connected by commas
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