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Identify the problem with sentence. Thelma was the person who wrote the sales manual originally in the beginning. A. use of passive voice B. wordiness C. inconsistent style
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b is your answer
Step-by-step explanation:
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The problem occured in the sentence is definitely
B. wordiness. Words "originally" and "i the beginning" have the same meaning so there is no point to put them together in the sentence. It just makes no sense.
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