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Carmen Martinez, number 42.” I took a deep breath as my name rumbled through the loudspeaker. I was so nervous! With each step from the on-deck circle to the batter’s box, I thought my knees would give out and I would collapse. My stomach was in knots.

One chance. I had one chance to help my team win this game so we could go to the state semifinals. I could hear the crowd cheering for me. “You got this!” they screamed. “You can do this!” I hoped I could.

Which is the best example of a vivid sensory detail?

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the answer is B. you welcome have a wonderful day


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Which is the best example of a vivid sensory detail?

I thought my knees would give out and I would collapse. My stomach was in knots.

This line shows how nervous Carmen Martinez was as she slowly approached the batter's box.
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