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which of these sentences adds vivid words to a narrative about the first day of school? a) as i walked slowly toward the school, my knees shook and my stomach was strange. b) as i walked toward the building, my knees felt unsteady and stomach felt sick. c) as i trudged toward the school, my knees quivered and my stomach flipped. d) as i trudged toward the building, my knees and my stomach felt weird.

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The sentence that adds vivid words to a narrative about the first day of school would be the third option - C. As I trudged toward the building, my knees quivered and my stomach flipped.
The words such as trudged, quivered, and flipped add this vividness to the narrative.
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