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Create a paraphrase of the following sentence from “The Cold Equations”: She stopped occasionally, as though trying to find the right words to tell them what she wanted them to know, then the pencil would resume its whispering to the paper.

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As she was writing, she took a break from time to time in order to reflect on the exact words that she wanted to use, and then she would return to the letter.

Step-by-step explanation:

To paraphrase means to express the idea of a writer in a different manner and with other words, especially to enunciate something clearer. As a result, the rewording of the sentence from "The Cold Equations" has a simpler language.

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The sentence showed the part of the story where Marilyn is making letters for her family. She wants her brother to remember only the positive side of her. This is a paraphrase of the sentence. "She paused from time to time to think carefully on what words to say for her family, then she continued to write her letters."
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