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Select the style most effective for a suspenseful story.

1. The tough guys were bigger and tougher and William was nervous.
2. They were upon him instantly. William gulped nervously. He then smiled slowly.

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Answer:

number 2 is more suspenful because it makes you wonder what he was simling about

Step-by-step explanation:

In number 1 it gives all of the details so it doesnt make you wonder

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