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Reword the sentences to make the thoughts clear.

1. Is Christy the man who owns the garage's daughter?
2. After Mrs. James christened the ship, she slid down the ramps into the sea.
3. I saw the building running down the street.
4. When ten years old, my father died.

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1. Is the garage girl christy`s daughter?
2. Mrs james slid down thenramps into the sea after she christened the ship
3. running down the street i saw the building
4. my father died when i were ten years old.

hope this helped :)
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Answer:

1. Is Christy the daughter of the man who owns the garage?

2. Mrs. James slid down the ramps into the sea after she christened the ship.

3. I saw the building while I was running down the street.

4. My father died when I was ten years old.

Step-by-step explanation:

The sentences present subject mistakes as well as collocation mistakes, the ideas are hard to read and might be either confusing or they can convey an unwanted meaning, then with the addition of subjects, punctuation marks and the rearranging of some parts of speech, the message becomes clearer and harder to be misunderstood.

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