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Which of the following is the correct way to rewrite the following run-on sentence? Mike joined the Army he became more disciplined during the training. A. Mike joined the Army and more disciplined during the training. B. Mike joined the Army, and he became more disciplined during the training. C. Mike joined the Army and became more disciplined; during the training. D. Mike joined the Army, he became more disciplined during the training

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The correct option is B. Mike joined the Army, and he became more disciplined during the training.

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The correct option is B. Mike joined the Army, and he became more disciplined during the training. The correct way to connect these two clauses is to introduce a conjunction "and." A is incorrect because there should be a comma/conjunction between the words Army and he. C is incorrect because that semi colon is just randomly and incorrectly placed without a context. D is incorrect because there should also be the word "and" before "he."
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