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How would you revise this sentence to make it more appropriate for a business proposal?

This program rocks the house.

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The program is very excellent for buisness.
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Answer:

This progam will be certainly appealing to the audience.

Step-by-step explanation:

"To rock the house" is an informal expression which means that a music show , mianly a band, is so good it makes the audience get crazy about them. In fact, they get the audience feel extremely enthusiastic. So, in a business proposal the idea is to say that t"he program", which will refer to the program a music band may have, will be really good because the audience will find it certainly appealing.

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