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read the sentence.i told them how surprised and excited i was to have my painting selected, especially since i’d felt so incompetent at the beginning and i knew the competition was so ruthless.which revision best uses dialogue to improve the sentence?

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Unfortunately, you didn't share any options so that my answer could coincide with your option list given with the task, but think we have got the same things. I am pretty sure that the revision which best used in dialogue to improve the sentence is:

“Did you hear?” I asked them. “My painting got selected! Exciting, right?” I smiled.
Hope it will help you in some measure.
User Dr Manhattan
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