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Choose the more poetic sentence of the pair of sentences. An elephant led the parade, playing on a fife. He thought he saw an elephant that practiced on a fife.​

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Answer: “An elephant led the parade, playing on a fife.”

Explanation: This sentence is direct action and is more poetic than saying he saw this.

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“An elephant led the parade, playing on a fife.” This sentence is direct action and is more poetic than saying he saw this.
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