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Which sentence has the most traditional syntax?

A. The mother, twisting and waiting quietly, her ring circled a pale finger.

B. The mother waited quietly, twisting her ring around a pale finger.

C. Waiting quietly and twisting her ring, the mother had a pale finger.

D. With quiet waiting, the mother twisted her ring around a pale finger.

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I know it is not 'A'. Took the test...got it wrong.

User Jinge
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A makes more sentence.
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