Question

What are the errors/grammatical lapses found in this essay?

My Favorite Car

All people dream of having their own car, and I am not an exception.I have one dream to get a good job and earn money, good money, so I will be able to buy my dream car, the BMW M3 in Black or White.I really like it! It is my favorite sports car.It has a good shape, especially from the front, which looks perfect. It's strong and can take hard hits without sustaining much damage.BMW has always been a symbol of speed and prestige and elegance. It has even been described as a ‘passion on wheels’. The design elements of the BMW are all made with style in mind.It has powerful and responsive engines, improved braking systems. BMW is headquartered in Munich, Bavaria and Germany.I like this car because it looks like a car that I could ride around in having a good time with.This car has tremendous speed reaching up to 185 mph and higher. This car is very nice and has great control on the road and it is a convertible so you could really have fun in it.That is why I like the BMW.As you can see, BMW is a great car. This car is liked all across the world and I think you can see why. The people that would like this car are people that are outgoing and like speed.

Answer 1

Hmm it is overall good but there are a few issues with it. I will tell you what needs to be edited on this. Just proof read this for grammar issues and you should be fine. Its very well written and my teacher, as a side not told me to never use "you" in an essay. Alright, thats all I have to say, and an excellent job u did there :D