Question

It began to rain - the officials cancelled the game. Which revision most effectively corrects the fused sentence? A. It began to rain, therefore the officials cancelled the game. B. It began to rain, so the officials cancelled the game. C. It began to rain, the officials cancelled the game.

Answer 1

The best revision that can be done to the original statement, It began to rain - the officials cancelled the game., is to use the concluding terms such as so. Therefore, the answer would be letter "B. It began to rain, so the officials cancelled the game."

Answer 2

It began to rain - the officials cancelled the game.
The best correction would be ;
It began to rain, so the officials cancelled the game.