Is this the correct outline for a thesis?
Title: advertising clothing to teens
Thesis: Are advertisements aimed at teenagers effective? And, are they ethical?
I. advertising aimed at teens is it ethical?
A. aimed at teens
B. ethical
1. Varies
2. Not ethical
II. Acne commercials
A. possibly aimed at teens
1. Teenagers
2. Teens have acne
3. Puberty
B. back to school advertisements
C. teens to look good for school
D. being in style
III. Are advertisement aimed at teens and are they ethical